Hey man this looks frigging awesome I really like the style, although I liked the first version also. Her boobs were a little too big I admit but they fitted with the style I think. Can't wait to see it colored..
I was going to suggest to use this for our collab because I like it very much, but I saw someone else wanted to color this thing, so that might be a problem (or not, please tell me what you think )
hey i dont think thats a problem at all!
i mean there are 2 possibilities:
1) u just take my pic, and use it and color it so it works with your landscape or whatever u are planning on doing! OR
2) we wait til PIXEL colored this and then u play with it, cuz im shure he wont mind at all! and well make this a 3person collab
Overall this is drawn A LOT better, but you lost the look of her being a warrior indian type chick or something, she looks all Pocahontas here. Not thats that is a bad thing, this is REALLY friggen nice, just i liked the face and such on the last one. All i could suggest to fix the last one is sort of bring out the sides of the breast cups that are supporting so they dont look like part of her breasts, but something holding them up. Then the other would look great.
glad u still like her the way she looks now! just felt like changing her eyes and then fixed a bit more. im pretty pleased with the result. now i only need to get the lines cleaned up and in a possibility so it can be colored!
really nice style. I like how it flows and the crisp lines remind me of comics. And there is nothing wrong with her chest in my opinion. It's a stylized character so the flow of the anatomy is right with the lines. Good Job.
looks neater now...but big boobs are always great hahaha..the only problem i had with them before was because they were like falling to the side of her body..and these ones are nice and close together..
i see what you mean but im happy with the way they look now. theyre like squeezed together an hold up like a push-up. i dont have to draw things like they would look in real life cuz i like to exaggerate forms every now and then, something where i can let my graffiti influence flow in u know?
but seriously, thank you for your opinion!